
TIME |
- 12:00 pm, Networking
- 12:15 pm, Introductions & Incentives
- around 12:30-12:45 pm, Business meeting (we are not sure how long Intro & Incentives will take)
- 1:30 pm, Speaker (in person)
LOCATION | Meeting will be Hybrid via Zoom and the Columbus Metro Library, Karl Road Branch, 5590 Karl Rd, Columbus, OH 43229
FACILITATOR | Author & Literary Agent Rachel McMillan
TOPIC | Self Editing with Rachel
Nothing will replace a beta reader or a developmental editor, and those things are essential especially if you mean to indie publish a book. But, for beginning to query agents, there is a lot you can do to strengthen your manuscript on your own.
This presentation will help you take a look at your own manuscript through the eyes of an editor and pinpoint redundancies, narrative confusion and imagery on your own to impress beta readers, help you self-publish or get your manuscript polished for an agent.
Rachel will cover:
- Are you in the right POV?
- Identify overused words and redundancies
- Identifying when you say the same thing twice
- Mimicking action and tension in narrative tense
- How to cut your own word count
- Imagery and Simile: How much is too much?
- Dialogue and action beats
- Pacing and Prose: The delicate balance that keeps things moving
- Transparency? How to tell if what is clear to you is clear to the reader
Attending Our Hybrid Meeting
Presentation is free for members and prospective members who have not yet visited for two complimentary meetings.
For those members who cannot join us in person, join us via Zoom. The password will be posted in the Central Ohio Fiction Writers Google Group, and on the Central Ohio Fiction Writers Facebook page.
If you are not a COFW member and wish to attend this presentation via Zoom, email cofwpresident@gmail.com before end of day the Thursday before the meeting. Please note, the link spans from the moment we open the room to the social half hour through the business meeting and this program.
Per library policy, prepared food and non-alcoholic beverages are allowed in meeting rooms.
About Our Speaker
Rachel McMillan is the author of over 20 works of fiction and non-fiction and currently writes for Harper Collins US and Pen and Sword UK.
In addition to her extensive experience in the traditional publishing marketplaces, she has over 20 years of relevant publishing experience. For over a decade she worked in sales and editorial for Canada’s leading educational publisher, often providing key insight into acquisitions. A long time freelance editor, Rachel is often hired by agents to developmentally read client manuscripts before going on submission to major publishers.
Her passion for the book industry has led to many teaching opportunities for Agents Helping Authors, Resilient Writers and more.
Starting this Spring, Rachel will be teaching Publishing 101 for Writer’s Digest University.
Rachel has a wealth of personal and industry “tips and tricks” for how to catch common pitfalls in your manuscript — even without the eyes of a beta reader or editor.
Rachel represents 30 clients across 4 continents and is always reading.














